Saturday, April 13, 2013

Second (Possibly Final) Draft of the Script


A Sociopath's Charm 

Film's story: A dark comedy about a man's search to solve the puzzle of a mysterious book. On his journey, he explores the nature of the abnormal psychopathic personality, encountering many interesting people. 

Opening sequence:


Timing is approximate to see if it fits in 2 minutes.

00:00-00:06

EXTREME PICNICKING PICTURES (logo)

00:06-00:09 

Black screen

Title: Extreme Picknicking Pictures presents

[Sound of wind blowing]

00:10-00:20

[Music starts quietly]

[Opening shot: Either a coffee shop in the snow, exterior OR looking down on a cup of black coffee]

Voiceover:

This is a story about insanity. It begins with a strange rendezvous in a London coffee shop.

00:20-00:50

[A young man sits at a table in a coffee shop, waiting. He wears – or has with him – a thick coat. There is a scarf and gloves on the table.]

[Camera zooms in slowly on him as the voiceover continues] [Possible credits]

Voiceover:

It was a café where psychiatrists tended to gather; the Kings College Institute of Psychiatry being round the corner.

I was waiting for one now. She – along with several other academics around the world - had received an anonymous package in the post. The package contained a mystery.

None of them could figure out what it meant. They needed someone to crack the puzzle.

Not an academic.

Someone. More. Ruthless.

A Journalist.

[Camera halts - close up on face]

[Music volume increases]

Title: THE SOCIOPATH’S CHARM


[Profile shot. Or shot of the coffee itself. Sound of spoon clinking on mug.]

00:50-01:00

Voiceover:

My name is Ben Burnham.I was having a massive panic attack. A cult leader was suing me for calling him a sociopath.

[Noise of door opening and shutting. Wind blowing into café.]

01:00-01:30

[A young woman enters the café. She is wearing a thick coat, scarf and gloves]

[She sits. Mid shot.]

Girl: I’m Lea

Ben: I’m Ben [pause] Have you got it?

[Extreme high angle from above table? Girl slides package across the table. Ben opens it. Looks at it. Then looks up at her.]

Ben: It’s fascinating.

01:30-02:00

[Ben looks through the book. Book interspersed with credits.]

Credits

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