Thursday, December 13, 2012

First draft of the script (and possible notes about the book):

A Sociopath's Charm 
Film story: A dark comedy about a man's search to solve a puzzle - a mysterious book - and through this journey explores the nature of the psychopath/sociopath

Opening sequence:

[Long shot of young man (Ben) at a table in a coffee shop, waiting. He is wearing a thick coat. There is a scarf, gloves and two cups of coffee on the table] [Diegetic sounds from inside and outside the coffee shop] [Natural light coming from the windows] [Shot in the present, either morning/midday/afternoon] [Possibly snowing outside] [Other people are in the coffee shop (volunteering actors)]

Voiceover (Ben): “This is a tale of insanity. [Pause] It starts with a rather odd meeting in a coffee shop."

[Zooms slowly in on him until it is a close up of his face]

"It was a place where the student psychologists from the nearby University took their breaks.

[Eyes look towards something off camera]

Here was one now."

[Medium shot moved 180 degrees the other way. A young woman (Lea) walks from the door of the coffee shop towards the camera . She is wearing a thick coat, scarf, gloves and red glasses. She is carrying a book]

[Medium, over the shoulder shot behind Lea on Ben as she sits]

Lea: "I'm Lea"

[Close up, over the shoulder shot on Ben]

Ben: "I'm Ben" [Two shot] [awkward pause] "Have you got it?"

[Medium, over the shoulder shot on Lea]

[Lea slides the book across the table, the camera follows it]

[Close up, over the shoulder shot on Ben]

Ben: "It's wonderful."

[Close up on book]

[Music - A capella humming tune (sung with 3 female harmonies) (non-diegetic)]

[Ben looks through the book]

[Turns a few pages. The book is then interspersed with titles. Possible close ups of Ben as he looks through the book. Poisslbe shots of a different able showing 'Edward's' hands writing the book]

[Second to last page of the book contains the title of the film]

"A SOCIOPATH'S CHARM"

Notes about the book:

In a package. Book has a sticker on it.
Around 21 pages long. Expensively produced. Every other page is blank. Some pages either contain pictures or quotes.
Title: The Unbearable Lightness
Cover picture: Escher's "A self-potrait in a reflecting globe"
Written by: Edward Nigma
Last Page: Good Luck (or something like that)

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